Pretend your my Favorite high school english teacher proofreading my paper. Please write 2 or 3 important coments per page. They dont need to be always things I need to change, it can be something I did correctly. or how you liked that I added this in etc. examples: Are my ideas in a useful order? Can you follow the logic of my argument? Are my transitions clear? Did I follow my format below? Do all the paragraphs make sense? Choosing the correct preposition can be difficult for me. Can you make sure I’m using them correctly? Is my grammer correct? Keep in mind I am handing in this draft with comments as it is required to ask someone to proofread and submitting a copy. thanks!